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The first page of a short color comic I made 2 years ago, to complete a little tutorial book I made.
It was done in a hurry and I had difficulties with the page size @_@ *and it's easy to see it when looking at the next pages*
Go there if you want to see the whole comic: [link]

No english translation for the comic as it's too complicated for me *if you success to do a good translation, cookie for you! It means your english/french skills are really good*
The first page is simple so yeah:
"Some tears.
And his voice...

Why are you crying, my love?
Close my eyes, listen to my breath fading...

Cause you know...
You know...

... that I will recognize the taste of your kisses."

Blaaah it's awfully shojooooo once translated in english, it's almost embarrassing >__> so basically it's poor Blanche who doesn't like herself and meet this psychopath named Calixte, they fell in love lalala but she's sick and dying. The end. The translation of the last page would be this:
"(in the end) Calixte made me sleep.

Don't cry.
Isn't our love eternal?

Won't you wake me with a kiss?

I know the taste of your lips,
the touch of your fingers.

I will dream until the end,
and for all eternity, of the taste of your kisses. "


I think I will go to draw a bloody illustration now, to get rid of all this shojo thing in my head >__> ...

Tools:color ink

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:iconrazi-tobias:
I went and read the rest of the comic and yeah it's shojo but it's a really good tragic kind of shojo. You did REALLY well on this. The colors and the way you portrayed the emotions of the characters was amazing. Very nicely done.

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"Math is man's LIES. Is method of brain control." - Gogo from VanHeist's comics

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:iconpsyco-angel:
D: aw c'est trop adorable... mais triste >_<
j'adore les dessins comme toujours ^^

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I'm French, sorry for my poor English.
Icon by =Thunderskull ! <3
:iconkaibasangel13:
Guh, simply gorgeous. ; 3; I like this Shoujo thing in your head > u <

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:iconayamexxxuchiha:
Lolz, aw, I thought it was lovely....and I'm typically not a huge shoujo fan. ^^; It's sort of like a dark shoujo story anyways. :3

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"To be normal is the ideal aim of the unsuccessful" -- Carl Jung

"To do is to be -- Socrates
To be is to do -- Sartre
Do be do be doo -- Sinatra"
:iconmadsin92:
<3 beautiful =)

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:iconsarah3ddepp:
That great, nicely done.

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:iconkleptopyromaniac:
So sweetly sad... such a bittersweet tale they tell. Bravo... :heart:

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Smiles are better than frowns.... even when you're angry... Seriously... a smiling angry person is way more frightening than one who is frowning!
:iconcrystallis:
Ne t'inquiètes pas tu vas t'en remettre de tout ce shojo XD
Très joli dessin madame =3

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I'm not good in english, please, spare me !! :XD:
:iconpiruko:
Tears...
And his voice...

Why are you crying, my love?
Close my eyes, hear my breath calm down.

For you know..
you know..

That I would recognize the taste of your kisses.


Je suis allemand, mais je pense que c'est correct.

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I want to tell him that he’s foolish and naïve but my mouth doesn’t seem to hear me. It kisses Matty’s who foolishly and naïvely addicts.
:iconpiruko:
Oh, lol, I should read the whole comment of yours.

Sorry, jeez.

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I want to tell him that he’s foolish and naïve but my mouth doesn’t seem to hear me. It kisses Matty’s who foolishly and naïvely addicts.

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